Notes, Notings, and Common Refrains

So I took a break from my poetry book, and tried it out --redoing a video for a birthday song I wrote a few years ago: Your friends all sing (With redone lyrics, too).

...The mic also picked up the sound of its own creaking as it moved while I opened and closed my jaw ...

Um, I'm not sure how to fix that.

Also, I'm rather pleased to have written my closed captioning track completely typo free on the first attempt. :-)